From Poetic Asides: For today's prompt, write a history poem. This could mean a poem about your country's history, the history of an event or a tool, or even your own personal history. Hey, you could even write about the history of a relationship. The history of everything is fair game. Have fun!
So I decided to tackle a poetic form with this one. I pulled out my Poet's Notebook and found a villanelle, which, despite how it sounds, is not a female villain. A villanelle is an Italian verse form with five tercets, rhymed ABA, and a concluding quatrain, rhymed ABAA. I took a free verse poem I'd written in France for the Notre Dame Cathedral, and re-worked it following the form. It was something like solving a mathematical equation, but I felt it fit with the cathedral's symmetrical architecture.
Our Mother
Reality, or so it goes
Is clasped within her plainsong dreams
With this endless La Vie en Rose
Into the glass, divine light flows
All broken shards and streaming beams
While in her heart the saints repose
Beneath her wings, all mankind froze
Astounded by the Martyr’s gleams
With this endless La Vie en Rose
Along the
Replete with light or so it seems
While in her arms poets repose
Through you and me, a stillness grows
No better life, my heart esteems
Than this sweetness, La Vie en Rose
Across your face, the color flows
In lovely liquid shining streams
We bid au revoir to all our woes
Embracing this La Vie en RoseThanks for reading!
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Wow! That's a better villanelle than any I've written!
ReplyDelete"Such cathedrals are only built by heart[s] in monstrous despair or ...Dionysian ecstasy,.... Only a superman is capable of such creative despair."
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